Friday, July 15, 2022
Rambling Friday:
Wednesday, July 13, 2022
Serious Wednesday: This Month: A Contest for Readers
Do You Love to Read?
Then this contest is for YOU!!
If you've read BOOK ONE of the
Troubles in the West series,
(Caleb's Destiny),
and you want to win BOOK TWO
Hunter's Rose,
then this one's for you:
To win a copy of
Hunter's Rose,
Here's what to do:
1. Share about this contest,
then post your link here in the comments on where you shared
2. Tell me why you should win this contest
3. And why you want to read
It's easy and fun!
Follow the directions above
Make sure you do all THREE of the requirements,
AND then later this month,
I will choose ONE person to win
a KINDLE copy of
Hunter's Rose,
Book Two
of the
Troubles in the West series.
Have fun!
Wednesday, June 15, 2022
Serious Wednesday: A Chance to Win My Book and Many Others
Wednesday, May 11, 2022
Serious Wednesday: Hunter's Rose: A Hint about the Book
Blurb:
It's the late 1800s and Hunter Carson has married the woman of his dreams and settled on the land he bought in a home that most people couldn't afford. His wife—the beautiful and exotic Mexican Rosita DeSantis, is totally in love with him—but something is wrong. Just days after their marriage, why is she crying and touchy? Has she fallen out of love with him already? Or is there something far more serious going on with her?
Rosita's past is haunting her—both physically and emotionally. She adores her new husband, and she'll do anything to keep him from knowing what happened in Mexico before she fled the country. And not because she doesn't trust him, but she's worried for his life. After all, the Mexican Lord—Carlos De Leon—has a plan and will do anything to accomplish it, and Rosita will do anything to keep him from succeeding.
Carlos De Leon cares nothing for God or any man.
His only desire is to obtain what he wants and when.
Hunter Carson has never known God or even much about him. But his tender heart can be touched. Will he learn and accept the teaching?
Rosita De Santis Carson, an only child, had a loving family who came to accept God into their lives through the ministry of a missionary. Can she hold onto her beliefs through the trials and tests she'll face when Carlos De Leon insists on forcing her to marry him?
COMING SOON!
Wednesday, November 24, 2021
Serious Wednesday: Remember...Caleb's Destiny?
Have you read Caleb's Destiny?
Mr. Michael, Destiny Rose McCulloch, and Hunter have a mysterious history. Why were three fathers, all business partners, murdered under suspicious circumstances while on their quest to find gold?
Hunter, who is Mr. Michael's ranch manager, is determined to find the answers and protect the precocious young lady who he suspects holds a key answer to his questions.
Mr. Michael wants only to be left alone to attend to his property, but what can he do when Destiny refuses to leave and captures the heart of every one of his employees?
Destiny almost forgets her quest when she falls in love with Mr. Michael's ranch and all the people there. And then Mr. Michael is much too alluring to ignore. The preacher man back east where she took her schooling tried to claim her heart, but the longer she stays the less she can remember him. She only came west to find a little boy she knew years ago. A little boy all grown up by now...unless, of course, he's dead.
http://amzn.to/1nFS0og
Now I'm working on
Hunter's Rose,
Book Two
which is scheduled for release
Spring, 2022
Here's a short blurb:
Rosita, the rose of his life.
Beautiful, and terrified.
But of what?
Any guesses what the story will be about?
Stay in touch.
A longer blurb,
a cover reveal
and more will be revealed...
in the next few months!
Wednesday, November 17, 2021
Serious Wednesday: In Love With ...
I'm so in love with...
SUSPENSE!
and by that I mean...
WRITING suspense.
Why?
Keeps my attention.
Gives me enough thrill without being overly scary.
I enjoy plotting the hard times
the protagonist goes through.
But also,
the triumph he/she feels,
the victory she/he can claim,
the joy and/or relief in overcoming
the hard time.
What else?
In suspense, you can add touches of
whatever you want.
Meaning,
quirkiness,
romance,
Science fiction,
a bit of inspiration
or anything else that interests you.
You can make it as fun as you want,
as serious as you love,
Suspense.
The Best of the Best!
My opinion.
Wednesday, November 25, 2020
Serious Wednesday: Does Age Matter? by Catherine Castle!
Well, does it?
Not according to Catherine!
Read on to find out what her thoughts are about writing, publishing, and age! Enjoy!
Age Doesn’t Matter—Just Ask Abraham’s Wife Sarah
I got a text from my daughter the other day. It read, “You’re kind of like Laura Ingalls Wilder. She didn’t get published until 65.”
I took a bit of umbrage to that statement, and pulled a bit of pride from it as well. I’d love to be an internationally well-known writer like Laura Ingalls Wilder, who was one of my favorite authors –as well as my daughter’s favorite author, now and when she was young. I wasn’t so crazy about the 65 bit, however. I was under 65 when my first book was published, and well under 65 in how-young-you-feel-and-look years. (And isn’t that what really counts?)
However, my daughter’s statement got me to thinking about how our accomplishments aren’t limited to age. I was actually in my early 40s when I began writing professionally as a stringer for our local town newspaper. I’d always loved to write and had filled a notebook full of poems, written dozens of short stories that never made it past the Mom-thinks-it’s-wonderful stage, and composed countless school essays that always made great marks. The writing assignments that other students groaned about, I relished. I loved everything about them, from the research, to the actual writing, and even the editing—things that serve me well now as a published author.
Writing and reading have always been my passions, along with singing and acting. As a teenager, I wanted to be a rock-and-roll singer or act on stage. At the time, writing never even entered my realm of careers. It was only a hobby I loved. I never made it to the limelight of center stage, in spite of the many times I tried out for school plays or musicals. I got chorus parts, but never the starring roles.
Ahh, but never give up. There’s a time and a place for everything and, for some of us, that time comes later in life. Today, I’m a published author—both as a solo author and co-authoring with my husband. I sing on stage at church, praising the Lord who gave me my voice. I’m also co-writing plays for our church (with my husband), acting and co-directing in plays for our church. Granted, it’s not Hollywood, which I have decided I wouldn’t want to be part of now anyway. Nor am I on the New York Times Bestseller list, to which I still aspire. But I’m doing what I’ve always wanted to. I’ve discovered doing what you love, at any age, is satisfying beyond belief.
Here’s the interesting thing about how everything turned out: I believe I’m right where God wants me to be, at the time of my life he wanted me to be there. After all, if he could give Sarah and Abraham a child in their old age, at just the right time to begin His plan of salvation for the world, who am I to question why my bit of success didn’t come when I was twenty?
Mine is not to wonder why, but just to do and be satisfied. So, if you’re bemoaning the fact that you haven’t “made it” yet in the publishing world, or with any other goal you’ve set for yourself, don’t. Just keep working toward that goal and relish the success, no matter how big or small, when it comes.
Catherine achieved her goal publication and also won several awards with her debut book, The Nun and the Narc. Check out the blurb and read a sample on Amazon.
ABOUT The Nun and the Narc
By Catherine Castle
Where novice Sister Margaret Mary goes, trouble follows. When she barges into a drug deal the local Mexican drug lord captures her. To escape she must depend on undercover DEA agent Jed Bond. Jed’s attitude toward her is exasperating, but when she finds herself inexplicable attracted to him he becomes more dangerous than the men who have captured them, because he is making her doubt her decision to take her final vows. Escape back to the nunnery is imperative, but life at the convent, if she can still take her final vows, will never be the same.
Nuns shouldn’t look, talk, act, or kiss like Sister Margaret Mary O’Connor—at least that’s what Jed Bond thinks. She hampers his escape plans with her compulsiveness and compassion and in the process makes Jed question his own beliefs. After years of walling up his emotions in an attempt to become the best agent possible, Sister Margaret is crumbling Jed’s defenses and opening his heart. To lure her away from the church would be unforgivable—to lose her unbearable
The Nun and the Narc is available on Amazon and Barnes and Noble
About the Author:
Multi-award winning author Catherine Castle loves writing. Before beginning her career as a romance writer she worked part-time as a freelance writer. She has over 600 articles and photographs to her credit, under her real name, in the Christian and secular market. She also lays claim to over 300 internet articles written on a variety of subjects and several hundred poems.
In addition to writing, she loves reading, traveling, singing, theatre, quilting, and gardening. She’s a passionate gardener whose garden won a “Best Hillside Garden” award from the local gardening club.
She writes sweet and inspirational romances. You can find her award-winning Soul Mate books The Nun and the Narc and A Groom for Mama, on Amazon and Barnes and Noble.
Follow her on Twitter @AuthorCCastle, FB or her blog.
Jed’s head whipped around just as the car plowed through a market stand of live chickens. Poultry, wooden cages, and feathers scattered over the car. An angry hen dropped through the car’s open sunroof, squawking and flapping in front of Jed, beating his head with its wings.
Margaret reached over, grabbed the bird, and threw it back out the sunroof opening. But it was too late. The car glanced off an adobe wall into a second market stand and careened toward another building. Jed jammed on the brakes. The car spun three hundred and sixty degrees before screeching to a stop.
The impact threw Margaret sideways against the passenger window. She hit her head on the glass, the blow blinding her for a second. Jed’s body slammed into the steering wheel setting off the horn. The wail echoed in Margaret’s head as she struggled to remain conscious. Warmth trickled down the side of her head. Margaret managed to focus her eyes as the noise stopped. Two Jeds leaned toward her, in slow motion. She blinked to clear her vision.
“You all right?” he asked.
“I think so.” Something warm and sticky seeped down her face. She reached up and wiped her temple. “I’m bleeding,” she said as she stared at her fingers. The words sounded slurred. At the sight of the blood on her fingers, her stomach rolled. She swallowed to keep the bile down.
“Listen. It won’t take them long to get here. Let me do the talking.”
“You won’t have to worry about that. I feel really odd.” Margaret lowered her head between her knees. “I think I’m going to faint.”
“It might be a whole lot easier if you do.”
Wednesday, August 12, 2020
Serious Wednesday: August's Contest and More Suspense Thoughts
Best Friends Contest for August:
Wednesday, July 22, 2020
Serious Wednesday: Some Suspense Quotes...and a Reminder



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PLUS:
These books are available on Amazon
for $.99 each!
Limited time!
The link to my book:
Knight in Shining Apron
(and all my other books):
https://www.amazon.com/Carole-Brown/e/B00EZV4RFY?ref=sr_ntt_srch_lnk_1&qid=1595423368&sr=1-1
Happy Day!
Wednesday, June 03, 2020
Serious Wednesdays: A New Book! and a GIVEAWAY!
Wednesday, May 20, 2020
Serious Wednesday: A Winner, and More About Suspense!
Wednesday, April 01, 2020
Serious Wednesday: Creating Tension
- When you begin any suspenseful section, don't begin with talking about the weather. Now, having said this, if you're using the weather to INCREASE or SET the mood or as PART of the suspense, then, by all means, keep going. Example: It was a dark and stormy night (overdone) but The lightning streak struck the fence post, not twenty feet from where I was standing. Better. Why is this important? The reader will find out much later in the book...
- Definitely draw your reader's attention to a matter of importance. It can be something so simple it seems to matter LITTLE at the reading but is vitally important. It could point to something significant that will reveal the meaning later in the story. But do capture your reader's attention. Example: The rhinestones on her shoes sparkled with flirtatious gaiety. Is there something about those shoes that will help solve the problem?
- Short, direct sentences and sometimes with repeated words, will bring a briskness, an urgency that something vitally important is happening or will happen. Don't overdo them, but use them wisely and carefully for a great start to any suspenseful scene. Example: Tyrell hurried to Bette and gripped her arms. "What do you mean? Tell me quick." This short paragraph immediately lets the reader know Tyrell is worried, upset, or afraid. It captures attention and shows urgency.
- If you must use backstory, leave it for later in the book and use it sparingly. Work to make the backstory such a part of the story that the reader moves seamlessly through the story and not hesitate for even a second. Example: Her mind flipped backward, backward to his confession that tore her heart from her chest. "I don't love you anymore. I'm leaving you. Today. Now. Goodbye." She rocked, clinching her arms around her legs, and wished she could douse her member in some kind of forgetful fluid. Tense. Heartwrenching. Backstory woven into the present that grips the reader and keeps them turning pages.
- And finally, learn from the best. Never stop learning. Never stop reading. Never stop striving to make your writing the best. Don't take short cuts. Learn, and it will show in your books!
Wednesday, March 18, 2020
Serious Wednesday: Digging Into Narrative Suspense
If you want to get technical about suspense, then almost any literary suspense book could be called "narrative" as long as the suspense builds and ends at the closing of the book. Narrative suspense means:
AND, if it's well written, then your readers will NOT be able to put the book down. With that said, your ending MUST be awesome!
Keep the suspense/clues coming throughout the book that gives the reader a sense of whatever resolution you are hinting at. There's a delicate balance in too much and not enough. Don't overwhelm, but definitely tease and increase the pressure of what might happen, what is going to happen. You don't want the reader to get angry or disappointed, so much so that their impatience with the plot turns to disappointment and a closing of the book.
Another idea to keep the suspense high is to have two suspense arcs.
In other words, you could have one that is:
- What is going to happen to Bill?
- The second one could be: What's going on with Nancy?
Wednesday, February 26, 2020
Serious Wednesdays: Did You Know...
...There are five types of suspense?- Narrative, which is a long-term suspense. Any literary suspense might be described as "narrative" and refers to tension that builds throughout the entire story.
- Short-term suspense: a moment or brief scene that provokes a powerful reaction from the reader.
- Mysterious suspense: In a suspense, the reader knows what's going to happen, but adding a little mystery to a suspense means that in brief scenes the reader may not know completely what's going to happen. They will eventually, but by adding this bit of mystery, it adds to suspense, deepening it and creating an intense emotion.
- Horrific suspense: by adding a touch of horror into a suspense, readers know something terrible is going to happen but do not know the exact nature of it. (Like waiting for a jump scare in a movie). This is used most commonly in horror and at times, in thriller novels.
- Romantic/Comedic suspense: Simply: romance, explosions, and mayhem with humor mixed in.
Wednesday, February 05, 2020
Serious Wednesday: What is a Suspense?
There's a big difference between suspense and mystery, but what is it?
Today, let's talk about what suspense is:
In a basic description, Suspense means that the reader is aware of things unknown to the protagonist. The protagonist goes through an emotional process where there is an unknown situation, event, or a threat that produces fear and anxiety and must be resolved.
People confuse mysteries and suspense books, but if you know the difference, it is the beginning of writing a terrific suspense.
1. Create a lofty viewpoint. In other words, the reader will view the action, the story throughout the book. Most times, he will also know who the antagonist is.
2. Time Constraints. There is a feeling of rush, an urgency that something must be done NOW!
3. The stakes must be kept high. There is a (sad, scary, heavy) price that will be paid if results aren't successful.
4. When it seems the story is smoothing out, apply more pressure. Don't allow the tension to resolve too early. Keep it up!
5. Creating dilemmas will help build pressure.
6. Complicate matters by causing problems and situations that confuse or hinder results.
7. Don't allow the reader to get too comfortable. By bringing in unpredictable situations, persons, actions, etc., the reader will wonder if the villain will win after all.
8. And, finally, the author must create a really good villain. If he/she's not realistic, not relatable in a negative way, then interest will wane.
These are just a few ways to help create suspense in your book.
Happy writing!
Wednesday, January 29, 2020
Serious Wednesdays: Write that Great Hook!
Last Wednesday, I wrote about some items that a writer needs to create a great novel. The first one was writing a hook to draw a reader into your book. But what is a hook and how do you create one? Here are a few ideas to get you started:
1. Make your characters sympathetic and relatable immediately
2. Create an inciting incident by using a setting
3. Create intrigue about your characters
4. Startle with the first line
5. Up the stakes within the first few lines
6. Use an ominous something as soon as you can
7. Use a mood theme
8. Begin with a life-changing moment
If you can successfully use one of these ideas for the opening lines in your novel, you will have pulled your reader into your book. Remember: the keyword is "successfully." Study other successful authors' openings, practice, but never give up.
You can do this!
Happy writing!
Wednesday, June 12, 2019
Serious Wednesday: Murder in Disguise by Donn Taylor
Link to buy:
- Jack Higgins (Henry Patterson), but especially his Paul Chavasse series and the first half of the Sean Dillon series.
- Also any of Harry Wegley’s thrillers
- and most Westerns by Terry Burns or Ernest Haycox.
- But my all-time favorite is Gavin Lyall’s The Wrong Side of the Sky.
- poetry by George Herbert, Tennyson, and W.H. Auden.
- For novels, it’s hard to beat Virginia Woolf’s To the Lighthouse.
- And just for fun the other day I revisited (in English translation, of course) part of Ariosto’s light-hearted epic romance, Orlando Furioso (Orlando Insane). It has wonderful comic situations.
- the late M. Stanton Evans’s Stalin’s Secret Agents
- and Paul Kengor’s Dupes (American non-communists who unthinkingly promoted Soviet Russia’s interests).
- But my favorite is Mark Moyar’s Triumph Forsaken, a historical study of early Vietnam War using Communist as well as US sources.
Donn
Taylor led an Infantry rifle platoon in the Korean War, served with
Army aviation in Vietnam, and worked with air reconnaissance in
Europe and Asia. Afterward, he earned a Ph.D. in Renaissance literature
and taught literature at two liberal arts colleges. His publications
include several suspense novels, one historical novel, and one book
of poetry. Two of his novels have been finalists in the Selah Awards.
He lives in the woods near Houston, TX, where he writes fiction,
poetry, and essays on current topics. A blog describing the action of
God in his life (“A Quiet Assurance”) is at
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