Showing posts with label scenes. Show all posts
Showing posts with label scenes. Show all posts

Wednesday, April 03, 2019

God's World and Our Imagination

And God saw everything that he had made, and behold, it was very good. --the Bible

As an author, I marvel at the sights of this beautiful planet. 
My imagination soars with the heights and floats with the breeze and waves. 
I imagine my established characters, and sometimes new ones, in these scenes.

Pictures and scenes are one of the greatest ways to foster ideas. 
I take LOTS of pictures in our travels. 
Some of them have made it into videos of my books. 
Others serve to keep my mind agile and brisk with ideas. 

Tell me, what kind of story ideas do these pictures give you?
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Do you see a young couple hiking in the northwest? 
What troubles do they stumble into? 
A dead body? A raging fire? Kidnapping? Finding themselves with new purpose? 
Do you imagine a family camping here and encountering wild creatures? 
Fishing? Hunting? 
Or can you see something entirely different?

For me, this one says: 
Set in Mexico, in a missionary setting, a young girl meets two very different impressive men, 
but which one is the right one--for her? 
Then, she must also figure out which one is the drug lord... 
Can she do both--and survive?



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What do you imagine here happening?

An Amish story? An 1800s novel? A wagon train passing through? 
Or perhaps a country farm setting with a wife who dabbles in mystery problems in the nearby town?

To me, I can see another story I've begun and hope to finish soon, set during the late 1800s, Destiny and Michael riding their horses through one of the fields he owns, arguing, both strong people who must decipher whose father was the gold thief and find love in the midst of their suspicions.



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In this one, what does this scene depict in your mind?

A scary situation? Mystery? A lost child? Can you feel the terror? 
Do crazy thoughts of someone jumping out at you lurk in your imagination? 
Can you see children in an adventure book strolling this path?

To me, I can see in my Alex and Denton Davies series, the two of them walking this semi-dark woodland pathway, searching for clues or chasing after a suspect.



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And one last one to stir your creative juices...

Does this bring to mind a warm, cozy feeling? 
Can you see an abominable snowmen lurking close by? 
Or can you see a couple meeting on the ski slopes? 
A family adventure? A lonely older person meeting his soul mate? 

I see a mountain lodge where a female detective looks for a psycho suspect and runs smack dab into a love she hadn't planned on. But can she find the bad person...and keep the love?


Can you see how we can use pictures and images to further our writing, 
to increase our creative juices, to spur us to keep writing, 
and to give us the encouragement we need when we're stumped?

Take advantage of everything and all things that keep you writing.
Tell me, what do YOU see in these pictures? 
What do you use to sit down at your writing desk and 
add a few more pages to your document?


Use that imagination!
Happy writing blessings!

Wednesday, February 20, 2019

Serious Wednesday: It's All in the Details


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Have you ever read a book that has the details wrong? And I'm not just talking about historical details, but mundane details that you didn't catch when writing--even editing--your manuscript. Examples:
  • You wrote that an event happened on Wednesday, but a couple chapters later, on that same Wednesday, you wrote a totally, and unusable, event happening at the same time?
  • Or what about forgetting to finish a subplot detail by not following through with a satisfactory solution?
  • Did you ever change a name and find out you missed a time or two where he/she's referred to as the previous name? Ouch!
  • Or start out with the main character's eyes blue and finish up with a green-eyed protagonist?

If you've ever read about this happening and don't want it to happen to you, or you know you've missed a few things in your manuscript, then may I suggest a couple ideas:

 1. Choose a paid-for program that works for you. There are different ones that are available that can give you guidance and steer you in the direction needed to keep all your manuscripts details clear and in order.  Depending on the money you want to invest, it can go from inexpensive to very expensive.

To those who like having it all set up for you in advance and have the money to spend, this is the way to go. There are all kinds of apps out there with varying prices. Google or ask other writers to find out what would work best for you.
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Note:
I've heard good things about Evernote (basic is free; premium costs a decent price). Use it to keep track of your characters by using tags and keywords: eye and hair colors, photos of possible character look-alikes, clothes, styles, etc., and articles of research that you want to keep and refer to later in your work.
Scrivener: a writing software where you write without worrying about formatting. You also have the ability to use tags and keywords, clip websites, store photos and other research material. It can outline with text or a simulated cork board with index cards. You also have the added benefit of it tracking your daily quota of writing.


2.  Create your own "program" where you keep a detailed list of what's happening, when, where and who.  This is the one I want to focus on today.
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First:  you'll need to decide what you'll use for your Details List: post it notes, whiteboard, index cards, spreadsheet, physical notebook, etc. Use these to help you:
  • Keep track of all characters, including minor characters who may appear only as a mention or very little in your book. List their names, ages, looks, habits, character traits, quirks, relationships (past and present) and anything else you might want to attribute to them and that helps you understand them better. You may not use everything, but it's valuable for you to determine why and how your character acts the way he/she does.
Example: It's easier than some realize to forget a minor character's name, what color of eyes you first used, etc. I changed a minor character's name in one book and couldn't remember what it was. Another time, I changed a pretty important character from one position to another, from one name to another, then back again. Details like this are so much easier to remember when you have your handy, detailed lists.
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  • Keep track of what happens in each chapter. Some events or thoughts or actions may need follow up in later chapters. This helps you to not miss anything that needs to be visited again.
Example: this saves tons of time when you need to double check something to make sure what you previously wrote vibes with what you're ready to write (rather than having to scroll through pages trying to find that particular scene).
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  • Keep track of all major scenes in your book. This is a more specific listing that keeps you right in line to where you're headed. You can follow the scenes and know whether you've left out any vital action, thought or words that would help clarify it or make it even more realistic.
Example: Recently, I wrote a scene of which I had that vague sense it wasn't quite what I wanted. But in the push to finish the book, I went on writing. When the first draft was finished, I realized details weren't as they should be in that one scene. I went back through and rewrote it twice before I came close to being satisfied with it.
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  • Keep track of timeline. Obviously, this is a biggie. Writers have to keep track of the time events happen, whether it's minor or major. Readers are sharp. They can pick up a major error like this easily if they're detail-oriented. It's an author's obligation to make sure their story's timeline is "time-right."
Example: Is it on Sunday morning before church or after an evening meal when the bad guy is taken to jail? Sometimes, especially when you switch viewpoints, you can overlap actions and times from various characters, but when it comes to certain actions or the same character, you have to consider that he just might not be able to scale Mount Everest the same time he's eating luncheon with his girlfriend. Keep it straight with your list!

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  • Keep track of your plot.  Make sure you're headed in the right direction. There will be changes and sidelines that create an even better story, but you want to remember that by keeping track of your plot, it will help keep you in line for a satisfactory ending. Every line, every scene, every chapter should lead to the ending of your plot.
Example:  In a couple of my books, I realized, the closer I got to the end, that the bad guy wasn't the one I'd planned for when I first commenced writing the book. Because I kept track of my plot--which didn't change--changing the character worked fine.
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There are many other things that can be added to your lists, but the main thing is, keep track, however you decide to do it. I like simple and easy, so going my own way (preparing my own lists--usually with physical notebooks or cards) works for me.

However you decide to go, I think you'll find this a great idea. Many times writers want to write and not be bothered or "distracted" with lists and such. But I encourage you to give it a try. I had the same mentality once I seriously began writing novels. It didn't take long for me to realize I needed help...and lists was the way to go.


Questions? Ask. If I know the answer, I'll be glad to respond. If I don't I'll try to find the answer. 
Best to you as you work on your manuscript!


Blessings!

Sunday, March 18, 2018

Sunday Morning Peace: Glory of God


In the beginning God 
created the heavens and the earth...

And God saw that it was good.


Happy Sunday!

Sunday, June 19, 2016

Sunday Morning Peace: What's Important?

What's Important in Life?
Obviously, to this man--the mama cat is.

God cares for us.
He cares for the little things in our lives.
He'll even stop the traffic--to show his love and support.

Never doubt it!


Blessings!

Friday, November 13, 2009

Favorite Scenes from Fall







My "old" scarecrow friend. He's been with me for years! He's kinda delapidated and lopsided, but I love him anyway!








One scene from our yard. Full of leaves and almost bare trees.










A perfect maple leaf, glorious in its yearly splender!








A little blurry, but a wonderful seasonal table topper.


Hope you're having a wonderful fall season. Can't wait till Thanksgiving!
Quote:
Attempt something so fantastic that unless God is in it, it is destined for failure.
Colorful blessings on you!

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