Showing posts with label Denton & Alex Davies. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Denton & Alex Davies. Show all posts

Wednesday, September 09, 2020

Serious Wednesday: Details on Writing a Mystery

Mystery books--I do believe--are my favorite books. I've loved them from childhood to the present time, and even try my hand at it. It's a work in progress for me, and I hope someday to be a great mystery writer. Time will tell about that!!


















What are some of the details that need to be used when writing mysteries? Here's a short, but important list:  

  • The culprit's character needs to be concealed. No one--not the reader and not the detective--should know who this person is until...revealing time.
  • Create revelations of clues in a chain of events, etc. Most of these should be important but not necessarily blatantly obvious.
  • A nice touch is to sidetrack your sleuth. Send them down a wrong path which means they may have to backtrack or that wrong path will give them facts to lead them to the true path they are searching for. 
  • Show (allow) intriguing actions without any type of explanation. In other words, sometimes an action may not register with the sleuth until much later in the book. Some happening, a word, an action, etc., may bring to mind that earlier bit of action and bind together with the present.
  • Write with intention in your sentence construction to build the suspense that leads to the answer of the mystery.
  • Watch your dialogue. Use suspenseful, mysterious sentences to build the tension.
Most of all, practice, practice, practice (which I'm doing!) 

Would you like to share a short scene--no more than 100 words--in a current mystery novel you're creating?

And have fun! 

Wednesday, May 09, 2018

Wacky Special Days and May Contest Question #1

This caught my eye and thought it was fun enough to include in this Wednesday's post. How many have you heard about and/or keep?


May, 2018 Daily Holidays, Special and Wacky Days:
May, 2018 Daily Holidays, Special and Wacky Days:

1 May Day


1 Loyalty Day


1 Mother Goose Day


1 Save the Rhino Day


2 Baby Day


2 Brothers and Sisters Day


3 Garden Meditation Day


3 Lumpy Rug Day


3 World Press Freedom Day


4 Bird Day


4 International Tuba Day - first Friday in May


4 National Candied Orange Peel Day


4 Renewal Day


4 Star Wars Day


4 Space Day - first Friday in May


5 Cinco de Mayo


5 Free Comic Book Day - first Saturday in May


5 National Hoagie Day


5 Oyster Day


6 Beverage Day


6 National Tourist Appreciation Day


6 National Nurses Day


6 No Diet Day


7 National Tourism Day


8 Iris  Day


8 National Teacher's Day - Tuesday of first full week of May


8 No Socks Day


8 V-E Day


8 World Red Cross Day / World Red Crescent Day


9 Lost Sock Memorial Day 


9 National Receptionist Day the second Wednesday in May


9 School Nurses Day the Wednesday during Nurse's Week


10 Clean up Your Room Day


11 Eat What You Want Day


11 Child Care Provider Day or Daycare Provider Day - Friday before Mother's Day


11 Military Spouses Day the Friday before Mother's Day 


11 Twilight Zone Day


12 Birth Mother's Day - Saturday before Mother's Day


12 Fatigue Syndrome Day


12 International Migratory Bird Day the second Saturday in May


12 International Nurses Day


12 Limerick Day13 Frog Jumping Day


12  National Train Day- Saturday closest to May 10th


12 National Windmill Day - the second Saturday in May


13 Leprechaun Day


13 Mother's Day second Sunday in May


14 Dance Like a Chicken Day


15 National Chocolate Chip Day


15 Police Officer's Memorial Day


15 Ramadan - begins at sundown, date varies


16 Love a Tree Day


16 National Sea Monkey Day


16 Wear Purple for Peace Day


17 Pack Rat Day


18 International Museum Day


18 National Bike to Work Day - third Friday of month


18 No Dirty Dishes Day


18 Visit Your Relatives Day


19 Armed Forces Day - third Saturday of month


19 Boy's Club Day


20 Be a Millionaire Day - now we all can go for that


20 Pick Strawberries Day


21 National Memo Day


21 National Waiters and Waitresses Day


22 Buy a Musical Instrument Day


22 World Goth Day


23 Lucky Penny Day


24 National Escargot Day


24 Victoria Day(Canada) - usually the 24th


25 Don't Fry Friday - Friday before Memorial Day


25 National Missing Children's Day


25 National Brown Bag It Day


25 National Towel Day - in the UK


25 National Wine Day


25 Tap Dance Day


26 International Jazz Day - Saturday of Memorial Day weekend.


26 Sally Ride Day


27 Sun Screen Day


28 Amnesty International Day


28 Memorial Day last Monday of month.


28 National Hamburger Day


29 Learn About Composting Day


30 Water a Flower Day


31 National Macaroon Day


31 Save Your Hearing Day


31 World No Tobacco Day






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May is here! 
Mid Spring.
May Flowers, you know
Mother's Day Month
May Day Month
School's out (well, in a lot of states)
What's not to love?

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Wednesday, November 01, 2017

Boo!! It's the Bad Guy!

Most stories have a bad guy, or at least a loser who's sought after a maiden heart, etc. Since I write mystery and/or suspense, I ALWAYS have a bad guy and sometimes more than one. Many times I’ll start out with one in mind…and lo, and behold, someone else insists that, “I’m your man!” Wow. A surprise for the author.
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Let me give you a couple examples from my own works.
In one of my books, I had a young man–a twin, no less–planned as the culprit. But the farther I advanced into the mystery, someone else stood out in bold outline as the person behind all the evil deeds. Yes, the first one, the young man, was a bully and easily swayed by the wrong companions, but it was soon evident, that the real mischief maker was the guilty party.
In the second book I want to use as an example, there was a planned harasser, a bully and a person who believed a lie. He was a very bad trouble maker, the perfect patsy of an antagonist for this book. But, again, I got a surprise when a quieter person, one most would never suspect ended up being the “bad guy” of this story for a different, one might even call it, more sinister reason.
What do you do when your characters change from one thing to another? Well, you go with the flow after reasoning, digging into the message and plot of your book, and deciding that it does make sense to listen to the characters, but most of all, to your heart that validates the changes will truly make your book more interesting.
What do YOU do when your characters tell you that that certain changes will strengthen your writing? Do you listen?
Check out my two cozy series to see if you can spot the changes I’m talking about here.
The Denton and Alex Davies series:  
 Hog Insane


Bat Crazy 


The Appleton, WV Romantic Mystery series:sabataged-christmas1-front-cover3
  • Sabotaged Christmas
  • Knight in Shining Apronfront-cover1-w-apple-blossom
  • Undiscovered Treasures
Happy Reading!

Wednesday, July 22, 2015

BAT CRAZY -- COMING!


Monster-sized bats with red eyes that attack humans?
Nah. At least Denton doesn't think so.

But when RV trouble forces them to stop at a dilapidated town called West Santina, 
Alex and Denton find themselves right in the center of a dangerous plot. 
With one attempted murder and a murder on their hands, they're hard pressed to trust anyone. 

Could it be the back-slapping mechanic who definitely isn't what he seems?
Or maybe the grouchy mayor is behind all the random acts of violence?
Or it could be the supervisor of the newly opened caverns? 
She's snotty and unfriendly and blames everything on her assistant Anne.

The Bat Clan and all the teen-aged batlins.sure are creepy.
Their crazy activities are enough to cause anyone some sleepless nights.

Bones and bats, painted symbols and hooded figures.
A wheezing worker and a cavern guide who wants help but isn't very helpful
are the least of the Davies trouble in their new adventure in New Mexico.

COMING SOON!
BAT CRAZY


Wednesday, January 15, 2014

Introducing . . . Denton and Alex Davies!

It's a thrill to introduce these detective--even if they are amateurs! I'm Caroline; Carole's interviewee, and I'm so-o-o excited to finally get some answers I've been dying to know. They've agreed to an interview so without any further ado, here they are!


Caroline:  Welcome, Denton and Alex! First off, Alex, do you mind your name being shortened from Alexandria? It's such a beautiful, elegant name.

Alex:  Not at all, Carole. I've gotten used to it. When we were first married, Denton began calling me Alex as an affectionate nickname, and it stuck. It works for everyday life.

Caroline: Tell me, how did you become amateur detectives? And why amateur?

Denton: In our first case, our pastor's wife asked us to locate an adopted nephew, Tony Risler. We did but the only problem was, he was murdered. Reluctantly--"

Alex interrupts:  You.

Denton glances at Alex (exasperated, I think): Me, then. We knew we needed to find out why Tony had been killed and what was going on. Not only because it interested us, but because of Selena Mathias, Tony's adoring aunt.

Alex: An we're amateurs because we've never had training. We use our eyes, ears and brains to lead us to clues that can possibly give us answers.

Denton: I really didn't want Alex involved. Way too dangerous!

Alex (tosses her head): Nonsense. It was a lot of fun, and as I always say, gave us purpose for the traveling.

That brings me to something I've wanted to ask ever since I read the book: What about this traveling? Do you love it? Why did you retire so early? How do you decide where to go? Do you miss your home? What about--

Denton (raises hand): Whoa! That's a lot of questions. I'll answer a couple and Alex can give a couple a shot.

Why did we retire early? Because I've worked hard all my life. Fortunately my business took off in the early years and I gained some very good clients. I didn't want to wait so long we couldn't travel and enjoy it. I knew it was time. Besides, more than anything, when our daughter Kelly asked if she could help me in my landscaping business, and I saw how well she did, I knew I had a replacement. She loves it. I keep a hand in a little, giving her advice when she asks, etc. After that, all I needed to do was find the right RV and persuade my wife to retire early too.

Alex, frowning a little: Which I really didn't want to do. I worked hard too to build my real estate business, but it didn't take off as early as Denton's, and it's only been the last few years that it's boomed. I hated to give it up just when I could enjoy what I'd worked so hard to achieve. Yet Denton wanted so much to travel, I gave in. Unhappily, yes. But thankfully, I finally realized, it wasn't all about what I wanted in life. We had health, a wonderful daughter, and each other.

Caroline: So you ended up in Carole Brown's first cozy mystery. How exciting is that?

(Both speaking at once) 
Alex: Very!
Denton: A surprise, but nice too. 

Caroline: Wow. Can't believe time's up. You two will return, won't you, so readers can find out more about your adventures to come? 

(Both nod vigorously!) 
Alex: We'd love to.
Denton: Sure thing.

Caroline, laughing: One last question: Do you have more books coming this year? I know I hope so!

Denton: Yep. Two. At least we're hoping so.

Alex interrupts: Bat Crazy will hopefully appear in June, and Daffy's Duck in late November.

Caroline, pleading: A tidbit about both please.

Alex, laughing: We got involved with the Bat Crazy case because of a conversation I overheard in a truck stop. It involves two kinds of bats, two brothers, and a dark, dark place.


Inline image 1Caroline: Dark, dark place? What on earth do you mean?

Alex laughs: Sorry, can't tell anymore right now. You just wanted a tidbit, didn't you? Here's the preview cover though:

Caroline: Looks great. And I think I know what you mean by a dark, dark place. :)

Denton (sniffs, but there are twinkles in his brown eyes): If you think her's looks great, take a gander at mine.

Alex: It's mine too.

Denton, grins: I know. I'm teasing you.

Caroline: And the cover?

Denton: Right . . . here:
Inline image 1
Caroline: What's it about? Tidbit please.

Denton: I received a strange letter in the mail from a man I hadn't heard from in years. In fact, I thought he'd died. He was always an odd bird.

Caroline: Bird, as in ducks?

Denton: Maybe.

Caroline: And the name of the book comes from . . .?

Denton: Well, obviously you can see there are ducks in the story. The rest you'll have to wait on.

Caroline: Fantastic. I'll let Carole know we need to have you back right away.  Best to you both, and have fun with your mysteries!

Alex and Denton: We will. Thanks.


Caroline: There you have it, folks. An introduction to the newest soon-to-be-famous (I think) amateur detectives. Fun times ahead, sounds like.

Blessings

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