Showing posts with label Toby's Troubles. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Toby's Troubles. Show all posts

Wednesday, September 09, 2020

Serious Wednesday: Details on Writing a Mystery

Mystery books--I do believe--are my favorite books. I've loved them from childhood to the present time, and even try my hand at it. It's a work in progress for me, and I hope someday to be a great mystery writer. Time will tell about that!!


















What are some of the details that need to be used when writing mysteries? Here's a short, but important list:  

  • The culprit's character needs to be concealed. No one--not the reader and not the detective--should know who this person is until...revealing time.
  • Create revelations of clues in a chain of events, etc. Most of these should be important but not necessarily blatantly obvious.
  • A nice touch is to sidetrack your sleuth. Send them down a wrong path which means they may have to backtrack or that wrong path will give them facts to lead them to the true path they are searching for. 
  • Show (allow) intriguing actions without any type of explanation. In other words, sometimes an action may not register with the sleuth until much later in the book. Some happening, a word, an action, etc., may bring to mind that earlier bit of action and bind together with the present.
  • Write with intention in your sentence construction to build the suspense that leads to the answer of the mystery.
  • Watch your dialogue. Use suspenseful, mysterious sentences to build the tension.
Most of all, practice, practice, practice (which I'm doing!) 

Would you like to share a short scene--no more than 100 words--in a current mystery novel you're creating?

And have fun! 

Wednesday, September 05, 2018

Serious Wednesdays: A Ghost, A Thief, and a Girl

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Everyone loves Toby Gibson. A co-owner of Undiscovered Treasures, a unique shop of antiques, collectibles, and junk, Toby is friendly, generous to a fault, the director of the local plays in Appleton and supports his church's youth functions. But the minute his sister, Caroline and her new husband, take off for their honeymoon, a “ghost” begins to haunt the shop—or maybe it's just an intruder. If so, Toby has no idea for what the thing is looking. To add to his troubles, he suspects Amy, not only is bidding for the property he's wanted forever but is in love with him. And he's not interested.

Amy Sanderson who owns the only flower shop in Appleton—Bloomin' Life—is drawn into capturing Toby's “ghost” when her own business is damaged by a destructive intruder. Having loved Toby since a teenager, she's more than willing to join forces with him. But she has no interest in being his best friend or a sister to him. And if she has to resort to schemes of outbidding him at his frequent auction attendances to get his attention, then so be it. She can be just as stubborn as the man who's determined to ignore her love.

In between the break-ins, destruction of property, thefts and personal competitions against each other, Amy and Toby work together to find the thief who seems so determined to find a valuable item, he'll stop at nothing.


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